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Leaving Clues for your readers



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Hi there, welcome to this week’s episode, and my “theme” of the week is clues – clues for your readers. Not only within your novel – and that’s the topic of this week’s writing craft segment, but also clue to help your readers find your book in the first place.

Last week, I covered the importance of book covers, and the week before that, your blurb. Still, we all need to help our readers find the book, notice the cover, get drawn into the blurb and make that crucial decision to purchase or borrow.

In today's digital age, getting your crime novel noticed online can feel like trying to solve a case with no leads. With millions of books vying for readers' attention, it's crucial to make sure your novel stands out from the crowd. And one of the most effective ways to do that is by choosing the right keywords and categories.

Think of keywords and categories as the DNA evidence of the online book world. They're the clues that help potential readers find your book among the countless others out there. And just like DNA evidence, the right keywords and categories can make all the difference in cracking the case of getting your book seen and read.

Why Keywords MatterWhen it comes to online visibility, keywords are king. These are the words and phrases that readers use to search for books online. And if your book doesn't include the right keywords, it's like it doesn't exist at all.

For example, let's say you've written a gritty crime novel set in New York City. You might use keywords like "crime fiction," "mystery," "NYPD," "serial killer," and "psychological thriller." These are all terms that readers who enjoy crime novels are likely to search for.

But here's the thing: you can't just stuff your book's metadata with every keyword under the sun. Just like a detective can't chase down every lead, you need to be strategic about which keywords you choose. Focus on the ones that are most relevant to your book and that you think readers are most likely to use.

One helpful exercise is to put yourself in your ideal reader's shoes. What words or phrases would they type into a search engine to find a book like yours? What other books or authors might they be interested in? Use these insights to guide your keyword choices.

It's also important to consider the competition. If you're using the same keywords as every other crime novel out there, your book is going to get lost in the shuffle. Try to find keywords that are specific to your book and that set it apart from the pack.

The Power of CategoriesIf keywords are the DNA evidence of online book visibility, categories are the forensic analysis that helps narrow down the suspects. When you assign your book to specific categories on online platforms like Amazon or Goodreads, you're telling potential readers exactly what kind of book it is and who it's for.

For a crime novel, some relevant categories might be "Mystery, Thriller & Suspense," "Police Procedurals," or "Hard-Boiled Mysteries." By choosing categories that accurately reflect your book's content and style, you're making it easier for the right readers to find it.

But just like with keywords, you need to be strategic about your category choices. Don't just pick the most popular or broad categories in hopes of reaching the widest possible audience. Instead, focus on the categories that are most specific to your book and that will attract your ideal readers.

It's also worth noting that different online platforms have different category systems. Amazon, for example, has a complex hierarchy of categories and subcategories, while Goodreads uses a more user-generated system of "shelves." Make sure you're familiar with the category options on each platform you're using and choose accordingly.

Putting It All TogetherNow that you know the importance of keywords and categories, it's time to put that knowledge into practice. Here are some tips for optimizing your book's online visibility:

  1. Research your keywords: Use tools like Google's Keyword Planner or Amazon's search bar to see what terms readers are using to find books like yours. Make a list of the most relevant and popular keywords.

  2. Use long-tail keywords: In addition to broad keywords like "crime fiction," consider using more specific, long-tail keywords like "female detective series" or "British cozy mystery." These may have less competition and can help you reach a more targeted audience.

  3. Optimize your metadata: Make sure your book's title, subtitle, description, and other metadata include your chosen keywords in a natural, non-spammy way. This will help search engines and readers alike understand what your book is about.

  4. Choose your categories wisely: Look at the categories of other books in your genre and consider which ones are the best fit for your book. Don't be afraid to get specific – a niche category can help you stand out.

  5. Keep an eye on your analytics: Most online book platforms offer some form of analytics or reporting to help you track your book's performance. Keep an eye on which keywords and categories are driving the most traffic and sales, and adjust your strategy accordingly.

  6. Don't forget about social media: In addition to optimizing your book's metadata, you can also use social media to promote your book and reach new readers. Use hashtags that include your chosen keywords and participate in online communities related to your genre.

To illustrate the power of keywords and categories, let's take a look at a real-life example. Author Lisa Regan writes crime novels featuring a female detective named Josie Quinn. When she first started publishing her series, Regan struggled to get noticed in the crowded crime fiction market.

But then she got strategic about her keywords and categories. She researched the terms that readers were using to find books like hers and optimized her metadata accordingly. She also experimented with different categories until she found the ones that were the best fit for her books.

The result? Regan's books started showing up in more searches and attracting more readers. Her sales and visibility skyrocketed, and she's now a USA Today bestselling author with a devoted fan base.

Regan's success story is proof that keywords and categories really do matter. By taking the time to research and optimize these elements, you can dramatically increase your book's online visibility and reach the readers who are most likely to love your work.

The Verdict. Choosing the right keywords and categories for your crime novel isn't always easy. It takes research, strategy, and a bit of trial and error. But it's worth the effort. In a world where online visibility can make or break a book's success, these elements are the keys to unlocking your novel's potential.


When it comes to crafting a gripping crime novel, the art of foreshadowing, planting clues, and adding tension is essential. These techniques are the secret ingredients that keep readers on the edge of their seats, furiously flipping pages to unravel the mystery. Let's see how you can master these elements and create a crime novel that will have your readers hooked from start to finish.

First, foreshadowing, which is the subtle art of hinting at what's to come.Foreshadowing is like leaving a trail of breadcrumbs for your readers, hinting at the twists and turns that lie ahead without giving away the game. It's all about dropping subtle hints and clues that make sense in hindsight but don't spoil the surprise.

One way to do this is through dialogue. Have your characters say things that seem innocuous at first but take on a whole new meaning later in the story. For example, a suspect might casually mention that they were out for a walk on the night of the murder, and later it's revealed that a key piece of evidence was found along that very route.

Another effective foreshadowing technique is to use symbols or motifs. Weave in recurring images or themes that hint at the underlying mystery. Maybe the victim always wore a distinctive piece of jewelry that keeps popping up in unexpected places. Or perhaps there's a certain phrase or quote that takes on a sinister meaning as the story unfolds.

The key to foreshadowing is subtlety. You want your readers to experience that delicious "aha!" moment when all the pieces fall into place, not feel like they've been hit over the head with a heavy-handed clue.

Clues are the bread and butter of any good crime novel. They're the tantalizing tidbits of information that keep readers guessing and trying to solve the case alongside the protagonist. But planting clues is a delicate balancing act. Reveal too much too soon, and you risk giving away the game. Reveal too little, and your readers may feel cheated or frustrated.

One strategy is to hide clues in plain sight. Place them right under your readers' noses, but in a way that they don't recognize their significance until later. For example, you might describe a seemingly ordinary object in great detail early on, only for it to become a key piece of evidence down the line.

Another approach is to bury clues in a sea of red herrings. Throw in a bunch of false leads and dead ends to keep readers guessing. Just be sure to play fair – all the information needed to solve the case should be there, even if it's cleverly disguised.

It's also important to pace your clues carefully. Dole them out gradually over the course of the story, like pieces of a jigsaw puzzle. Each new revelation should build on what came before, slowly but surely bringing the picture into focus.

Tension is what keeps readers turning pages long past their bedtime. It's that sense of unease, the feeling that something big is about to happen but you're not quite sure what. And in a crime novel, tension is king.

One way to ratchet up the tension is through pacing. Vary the speed and intensity of your scenes, alternating between high-octane action and quieter, more contemplative moments. Use short, punchy sentences to convey urgency and longer, more languid passages to build anticipation.

Cliffhangers are another tried-and-true tension-building technique. End chapters or scenes on a moment of high drama, leaving readers desperate to find out what happens next. Will the detective catch the killer in time? Will the witness spill the beans before it's too late?

Character conflict is also a great way to add tension. Pit your protagonist against a formidable adversary, someone who challenges them at every turn. Or create tension within the investigative team, with clashing personalities and competing agendas.

And don't be afraid to put your characters in real danger. The higher the stakes, the more invested readers will be in the outcome. Just be sure to balance the peril with moments of hope and triumph, or risk leaving your readers feeling drained and despondent.

The balancing act is putting it all together.Foreshadowing, planting clues, and adding tension are all essential elements of a great crime novel, but the real trick is making them work together in harmony. Too much foreshadowing can make the outcome feel inevitable, while too little can leave readers feeling blindsided. Too many clues can make the mystery feel too easy to solve, while too few can leave readers frustrated and unsatisfied. And too much tension can be exhausting, while too little can make the story feel flat and unengaging.

The key is to find the right balance for your story and your readers. Experiment with different techniques and see what works best. And don't be afraid to revise and refine as you go – the best crime novels are often the result of countless drafts and revisions.

One helpful exercise is to think like a detective yourself. As you're writing, constantly ask yourself: What clues would a real investigator look for in this situation? What might a clever criminal do to cover their tracks? How can I hint at the truth without giving too much away?

It's also important to remember that foreshadowing, clues, and tension are all in service of the larger story. They should never feel like gimmicks or cheap tricks, but rather organic parts of the narrative that deepen the characters and themes.

All the foreshadowing, clue-planting, and tension-building in the world won't matter if you don't stick the landing. The resolution of your crime novel is where all those carefully laid threads come together in a satisfying, surprising way.

The best resolutions feel both inevitable and unexpected. They're the logical outcome of everything that came before, but still manage to catch readers off guard. They tie up all the loose ends and answer all the lingering questions, but leave just enough ambiguity to keep readers thinking long after they've closed the book.

To achieve this, it's important to play fair with your readers. All the information needed to solve the case should be there, even if it's cleverly disguised. The solution should feel earned, not like it came out of left field.

It's also important to give your characters a satisfying arc. The resolution should feel like the culmination of their journey, the moment where they face their demons and emerge changed in some way. Whether they catch the killer or not, they should have grown and learned something along the way.

Crafting a gripping crime novel is no easy feat, but by mastering the art of foreshadowing, planting clues, and adding tension, you'll be well on your way. Remember to be subtle and strategic with your foreshadowing, to hide your clues in plain sight, and to vary the pacing and intensity to keep readers on the edge of their seats.

Most importantly, have fun with it! Writing a crime novel is an opportunity to play detective yourself, to unravel a mystery of your own making. So embrace the challenge, trust your instincts, and let your imagination run wild. Your readers will thank you for it


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